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Forum:Introductory section of articles

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I would like to bring up the matter of the introductory section. This section is usually the few paragraphs before an article's table of contents.

Now I can observe some inconsistency to how it is used.

First of all, let me make refer to how other wikis treat their lead sections:

  • In Wikipedia, the lead section is a "teaser" which defines the topic, establishes context, explains its notability, and summarizes the most important points. Wikipedia also describes a policy about its extent, eg. neither too short or long relatively to the rest of the article.
  • In the Star Trek wiki, the lead section establishes context, eg. explains that Spock is a Vulcan of the 23th century who served on the Enterprise and then became an ambassador.
  • In the Star Wars wiki, the lead section is a summary of the whole article, eg. describes a person's biography from birth to death, with highlights of his life. That way, information is unnecessarily repeated, but a hasty reader can read most of Darth Vader's life without reading his enormous biography.

Now, TG doesn't have a specific policy about what the lead section is about. It can be anything from a brief mention of a character's nature (Beleg was an Elf of Doriath"), his genealogy ("Frodo Baggins was the son of Drogo.") to what made that person significant ("Aragorn was a member of the Fellowship of the Ring and King of the Reunited Kingdom."). Mostly the lead section can include information that can't fit anywhere else in the article, such as appearance and description ("He was also tall, his hair was dark with patches of grey").

If you look at it, this creates inconsistent layout and unbalanced articles. Even a long biography can have a disproportional single introductory sentence stating something trivial, such as who that character's father was or where he was from.

An example of a bad introduction can be seen at Elfstone (which I wrote) that highlights the problem. That was until I decided that the description also belongs there, giving the lead section a purpose.

Perhaps the matter is trivial, or perhaps it could be a milestone for even better articles. Sage 13:58, 30 June 2013 (UTC)