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'''Esgaroth''' is used 10 times in ''[[The Hobbit]]'', whereas '''Lake-town''' is used 16 times. Should we move this to '''Lake-town'''?--{{User:KingAragorn/sig}} 11:21, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
'''Esgaroth''' is used 10 times in ''[[The Hobbit]]'', whereas '''Lake-town''' is used 16 times. Should we move this to '''Lake-town'''?--{{User:KingAragorn/sig}} 11:21, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
:+1. Another one I thought I had done! --{{User:Mith/sig}} 13:19, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

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  • It would be helpful if someone would indicate the reasons that this article needs to be rewritten, so some passerby might have a chance at improving it. Ainaldo
Yeah, good point. I think one reason is that the article almost completely lacks references. --Morgan 00:06, 22 January 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]
As the person who added Template:Rewrite, I reckon I can give 10 reasons:
  1. The main text - which is too short - was stolen from Wikipedia and remains unchanged in 5.5 years;
  2. Said text appears to have been written by someone incapable of connecting two sentences;
  3. It lacks structure;
  4. It contains speculation;
  5. It lacks sources;
  6. The text contains contradiction (for instance the infobox can't decide whether Esgaroth is a city or a town);
  7. There are not "Portrayal in Adaptations" or "In Other Versions of the Legendarium" sections;
  8. The text makes almost no mention of the events in The Hobbit as they receive a cursory mention in the last paragraph;
  9. The Language section contains a redlink and information not relevant to this article;
  10. The article contains just one date which doesn't conform to our standards (i.e. "Third Age 2941 or T.A. 2941").
I think there's more than enough wrong with this article! --Mith (Talk/Contribs/Edits) 01:01, 22 January 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]
Ta-da! Sage 17:47, 26 January 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]

Esgaroth or Lake-town?

Esgaroth is used 10 times in The Hobbit, whereas Lake-town is used 16 times. Should we move this to Lake-town?-- KingAragorn  talk  contribs  edits  email  11:21, 17 November 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]

+1. Another one I thought I had done! --Mith (Talk/Contribs/Edits) 13:19, 17 November 2011 (UTC)Reply[reply]