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[[Hyarion]] wrote: "Unfortunately due to disputes between the distributing rights and the filming rights progress is slow." Is this correctly worded? It reads rather odd! --[[User:Earendilyon|Earendilyon]] 13:42, 1 September 2006 (EDT)
 
[[Hyarion]] wrote: "Unfortunately due to disputes between the distributing rights and the filming rights progress is slow." Is this correctly worded? It reads rather odd! --[[User:Earendilyon|Earendilyon]] 13:42, 1 September 2006 (EDT)
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:It sounds better if we add a few commas in there: "Unfortunately, due to disputes between the distributing rights and the filming rights, progress is slow." --[[User:71.126.138.130|71.126.138.130]] 16:02, 1 September 2006 (EDT)

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Hyarion wrote: "Unfortunately due to disputes between the distributing rights and the filming rights progress is slow." Is this correctly worded? It reads rather odd! --Earendilyon 13:42, 1 September 2006 (EDT)

It sounds better if we add a few commas in there: "Unfortunately, due to disputes between the distributing rights and the filming rights, progress is slow." --71.126.138.130 16:02, 1 September 2006 (EDT)